I love your 3D story! It is very cool! The 3D roles of the story are interesting. It is obviously you are professional in making 3D design. Nice job!

But it was a little regret could not hear the sound. And 2 suggestion, I think you should revise the smoky (the main character used fighting to the bad air-plane) because it seems like water. Another suggestion is I think it will be better if you can revise your Project Title, such as ***story (3D animation).

I’m looking forward your final version project.

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The microwave movie animation was very impressive.  The animation was full of action and it was exciting.

My suggestion is that maybe you have an entry menu.  You may also want to maybe add a recorded running commentary to go along with the information slides that would provide a running commentary for any potential viewer.  This would save your having to be present and run commentary while anyone is viewing the project.

All in all, I think this is a good game animation project

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Your 3D animation movie is SO COOL.  Also, the story is fun, "Microwave saved the world." Interesting.

However, you might like to add something else to your project.

My suggestions are as below:

1) Create a site with welcome page and menu for your project.

2) Maybe consider add sound effects to the 3D movie. That would be cool if it goes with sounds.

3) Slower the duration time of scripts/subtitles.  Sometimes they disappear too fast for me to catch up.

In brief, your project is unique and fun.  I would look forward to seeing the completed one.

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I know I only saw a portion of the animation movie, but I thought you did a
really good job of it.  The graphics are all very nicely done and high
quality.  I think once you get it all together, and add the sound in it you
will have a nice video.

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